Pitch Presentation: Hunted

Above is my pitch presentation for my film idea. We had to present this to the class as they gave back feedback on it. It was done to see if there was any improvements that could of been done.

At the start, I was working on my own as I thought it would be easier for me to get work done. Aaron and Kieran now have joined me as one of their members has left. They are now going to be part of my group and are now working on my idea for the film's title sequence.

From this sheet of feedback, they have given both good and need developing points.
They said my narrative was good, used todorov. good use of director and actors/actresses.
For needing developing point, i could've added pictures of the actors and actresses.

from this sheet of feedback, i have got good bad and need developing points.
good points were good use of target audience, premise and narrative, and the themes.
need developing points were release date - go for summer instead.
bad points were director - should be a british director?

from this sheet of feedback, they gave me both good and need developing points.
good points are the story, considered gender (target audience), profit.
need developing points is consider other audiences, romantic element? and underlining messages.

this sheet of feedback didn't give me any at all.

from this sheet of feedback, they gave me just good points.
the good points are the plot, characters, title, director, narrative and the whole pitch was well detailed and well presented.

from this sheet of feedback, they gave me good, bad and need developing points.
good points is target audience.
need of developing points are narrative needs more detail, quite confusing, and the release date.
bad points is the budget, too many high profile actors for such a low budget.

from this sheet of feedback, they gave me good and need developing points.
good point were good description, good consideration of characters and director. target audience and release date is well thought out.
need developing points is budget too low and income expected too low.